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Orion

Updated: Dec 23, 2021



(After William Stafford)


The doe, long gone cold,

looked weirdly back at me,

her neck broken, her eye

frozen in a wall-eyed stare

from the black pit of death.


Her tawny hide leeched gray

flecks of fur. She had bartered

her beauty for one last leap

over the old wire fence.

Yesterday the hunters came.


Startled on my way back

to the car, I saw her hind leg

strangled in the top wire

of fencing, some farmer’s pledge

to remain a good neighbor.


My shadow loped far ahead of me

in the glow of a sleepy-eyed sun.

I was thinking how the river would

wash away the blood from my hands.

I was thinking about Faust and his folly.


At the car, I looked back, the deer’s eye

black as sin. Now, she would no longer

search the night sky for the pointed tip

of Orion’s arrow. Now, she no longer shivered

in winter’s chill. Behind me, two guns fired.


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Roy Beckemeyer
Roy Beckemeyer
Dec 23, 2021

Arlice - It would be too easy for me to say "Orion" harkened my mind back to William Stafford's "Traveling Through the Dark," though it of course must be stated. But the brevity of your line lengths, combined with the weight of emotion each word or line carries with it, makes "Orion" rather more of a visually indelible imprint, much starker than Stafford's poem, and I found myself tramping through the field, the immediacy of it all putting me right there with you, with the doe, with the raw reminders of mortality. Both your poem and his underline the feeling that we humans may be the bogie men of the rest of the natural world, our every action directly or…

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