Orion
- arliced
- Dec 22, 2021
- 1 min read
Updated: Dec 23, 2021

(After William Stafford)
The doe, long gone cold,
looked weirdly back at me,
her neck broken, her eye
frozen in a wall-eyed stare
from the black pit of death.
Her tawny hide leeched gray
flecks of fur. She had bartered
her beauty for one last leap
over the old wire fence.
Yesterday the hunters came.
Startled on my way back
to the car, I saw her hind leg
strangled in the top wire
of fencing, some farmer’s pledge
to remain a good neighbor.
My shadow loped far ahead of me
in the glow of a sleepy-eyed sun.
I was thinking how the river would
wash away the blood from my hands.
I was thinking about Faust and his folly.
At the car, I looked back, the deer’s eye
black as sin. Now, she would no longer
search the night sky for the pointed tip
of Orion’s arrow. Now, she no longer shivered
in winter’s chill. Behind me, two guns fired.
Arlice - It would be too easy for me to say "Orion" harkened my mind back to William Stafford's "Traveling Through the Dark," though it of course must be stated. But the brevity of your line lengths, combined with the weight of emotion each word or line carries with it, makes "Orion" rather more of a visually indelible imprint, much starker than Stafford's poem, and I found myself tramping through the field, the immediacy of it all putting me right there with you, with the doe, with the raw reminders of mortality. Both your poem and his underline the feeling that we humans may be the bogie men of the rest of the natural world, our every action directly or…